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 Sep 18 2007, 08:20 AM
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I'm not sure which I'm more impressed with, the iambic pentameter or the reference to "Rocky Horror" ...
-------------------- "The entire world is falling apart because no one will admit they are wrong." -- Don Miller, Blue Like Jazz. |
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Sep 18 2007, 08:27 AM
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QUOTE(SoulEspresso @ Sep 18 2007, 10:20 AM)  I'm not sure which I'm more impressed with, the iambic pentameter or the reference to "Rocky Horror" ... How about haiku? Oh Black SDA Tangential yet instructive teaching who will learn Couldn't resist  In His service, Mr. J -------------------- There is no one more dangerous than one who thinks he knows God with a mind that is ignorant - Dr. Lewis Anthony
You’ve got to be real comfortable in your own skin to survive the animosity your strength evokes in people you'd hope would like you. - Dr. Renita Weems |
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Sep 18 2007, 01:37 PM
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QUOTE(awesumtenor @ Sep 18 2007, 07:27 AM) How about haiku? Oh Black SDA Tangential yet instructive teaching who will learn Couldn't resist In His service, Mr. J Look who is late to the party!  I think we need to add a new forum here on BSDA! -------------------- Got Peace?
John 14:27 Peace I leave with you; my peace I give you. I do not give to you as the world gives. Do not let your hearts be troubled and do not be afraid. "Truth welcomes examination and doesn't need to defend itself, while deception hides in darkness and blames everyone else." Aunt B, 2007 |
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Sep 18 2007, 01:38 PM
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QUOTE(SoulEspresso @ Sep 18 2007, 07:20 AM) I'm not sure which I'm more impressed with, the iambic pentameter or the reference to "Rocky Horror" ... Soul, Am sitting here waiting for your own submission. I know it's there..... -------------------- Got Peace?
John 14:27 Peace I leave with you; my peace I give you. I do not give to you as the world gives. Do not let your hearts be troubled and do not be afraid. "Truth welcomes examination and doesn't need to defend itself, while deception hides in darkness and blames everyone else." Aunt B, 2007 |
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Sep 18 2007, 02:29 PM
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I can't write in iambic pentameter. I've tried, it doesn't work for me.
Danny fingers post In anger to defend him Lurkers silent read -------------------- "The entire world is falling apart because no one will admit they are wrong." -- Don Miller, Blue Like Jazz. |
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Sep 18 2007, 03:08 PM
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Here is a mixed up one I did while eating cafeteria Chinese food.
Times and Spaces Once upon a time and place on the plains of somewhere in time and space, there unrolled among the peasants the story of all that the bards have told in days of yore. As they spun their words of lore to the lyre and lute, the mice lining up to follow the flute, the epic tale of Paradise Lost was raging in dimensions of their own and across. This story: the spine of the world. On Dante’s inferno and levels of torture, the men of the church in their blood sanguine order, are jumping the fence like the cow and the moon, and just cause the mantra that locks up the room. Oh Cybil, where art thou, in three dozen places? These pictures I see are your three dozen faces? Oh Cybil, who art thou, the persons I know, or the shivering souls outside in the snow? With rats in the alley and Oliver Twist, they thought of the gold that they got and they risked. In chariots of fire they travel the earth, and their mothers are dying while others give birth. Oh Brutus, how could you? It’s me lying here in puddles of blood while you stand in the clear. Of morning and napalm, the bikes roaring past. And from soft lips a kiss that will not really last. And today we weep for the days of our glory, but the bats in hushed whispers are telling the story. The belfries are empty and silent today, and it seems that the sheep have all gone away. The bodies of water lie dead on the ground, but the base of the truth of the matter is found. |
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Sep 18 2007, 03:56 PM
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That must have been some Chinese food, beartrap!
 I thought the time for verse was gone But see the muse inspiring still, So rather, now, than journey on Will wait til all have had their fill. The only change I recommend Is staying to the topic true, For otherwise, this all might end, And garner caustic word or two. So weave into each piece of work A bit of what is in this thread. For those who post and those who lurk May finally see some light ahead. hmmmmm.... What is this tread about? -------------------- Got Peace?
John 14:27 Peace I leave with you; my peace I give you. I do not give to you as the world gives. Do not let your hearts be troubled and do not be afraid. "Truth welcomes examination and doesn't need to defend itself, while deception hides in darkness and blames everyone else." Aunt B, 2007 |
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Sep 18 2007, 05:29 PM
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QUOTE(PeacefulBe @ Sep 18 2007, 05:56 PM) So weave into each piece of work A bit of what is in this thread. For those who post and those who lurk May finally see some light ahead. Thanks, PB. I was beginning to feel like Alice in Wonderland...
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Sep 18 2007, 06:48 PM
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QUOTE(PeacefulBe @ Sep 18 2007, 02:56 PM) So weave into each piece of work A bit of what is in this thread. For those who post and those who lurk May finally see some light ahead. Oh, it is very much woven in. |
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Sep 18 2007, 07:51 PM
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QUOTE(awesumtenor) How about haiku? Oh Black SDA Tangential yet instructive teaching who will learn 3abn's in a vacuum BSDA is the black hole of thier universe -------------------- Disclaimer Notice: You are hereby cautioned that the information contained within these posts are for the sole purpose of provoking thought, adding fair comment on matters of public interest, and not providing factual information. These posts do not reflect the actual thoughts or intentions of the person writing under this username since said person is not in any position to know. No effort has been made to ensure the accuracy of any personal view, opinion, or hyperbole presented. Therefore, by disclosing, copying, or distributing these posts to others, such information must subsequently be confirmed in writing, signed and dated, by the actual person, or persons, posting behind username LaurenceD.
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Sep 18 2007, 07:54 PM
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QUOTE(beartrap @ Sep 18 2007, 05:48 PM) Oh, it is very much woven in. Mine was but a general call Meant to bring to focus all. Yet, as I have searched this thread, I'm not seeing that it said Much at all for quite some time. So we go on making rhyme, To ponder of tomatoe red And all the stuff that Rosie said. Though it seemed but proganda, Still it caused a few to wonder. Now a question troubles me, How 'bout those harddrives, appletree? Did your lawyers really gain Total access, as you claim? Will you prove, without a fuss, That you spoke the truth to us? -------------------- Got Peace?
John 14:27 Peace I leave with you; my peace I give you. I do not give to you as the world gives. Do not let your hearts be troubled and do not be afraid. "Truth welcomes examination and doesn't need to defend itself, while deception hides in darkness and blames everyone else." Aunt B, 2007 |
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Sep 18 2007, 08:05 PM
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QUOTE(beartrap) Is there a poetry thread somewhere? Mabey...lets play a game: Down near Cornville, near Sedona In that state called Arizona Lived a family of bears My friend--a friend of theirs Brought his family to church Got 'em out of a lurch He now lives on my ridge in NE Oregon's refrig -------------------- Disclaimer Notice: You are hereby cautioned that the information contained within these posts are for the sole purpose of provoking thought, adding fair comment on matters of public interest, and not providing factual information. These posts do not reflect the actual thoughts or intentions of the person writing under this username since said person is not in any position to know. No effort has been made to ensure the accuracy of any personal view, opinion, or hyperbole presented. Therefore, by disclosing, copying, or distributing these posts to others, such information must subsequently be confirmed in writing, signed and dated, by the actual person, or persons, posting behind username LaurenceD.
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Sep 18 2007, 08:48 PM
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A house full of bears
lived in Sedona, a home with steep stairs In warm Arizona. So some friends of the bears have moved to the fridge? Up north somewhere on an icy cold ridge? The bears have moved up to Canada's cold. Land of Stanley Cup and hockey so bold. |
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Sep 18 2007, 09:29 PM
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Yes, and...
I'll take a stab Slapstick and puck Did they have twins And move in a truck? And did sister bear Go to llu school... To focus on health As a general rule? Then the valley of eden Connections Colo Marqui and Brent, And Dr so-n-so Then there's the ant Who lived on a hill All strum for elstrums played out in Cornville -------------------- Disclaimer Notice: You are hereby cautioned that the information contained within these posts are for the sole purpose of provoking thought, adding fair comment on matters of public interest, and not providing factual information. These posts do not reflect the actual thoughts or intentions of the person writing under this username since said person is not in any position to know. No effort has been made to ensure the accuracy of any personal view, opinion, or hyperbole presented. Therefore, by disclosing, copying, or distributing these posts to others, such information must subsequently be confirmed in writing, signed and dated, by the actual person, or persons, posting behind username LaurenceD.
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Sep 18 2007, 10:10 PM
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Two year old twins and a lineup of trucks.
They travelled far south with a load of luck. At LLU and studies in health the sisters learned to earn their wealth. LOL to the Valley of Eden. Connections there have happened so often. |
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